The Story Continues

The Story Continues

I am a great fan of novellas and short stories, which no doubt explains why I have written so many over the past several years. One of my favorite short story book babies is A Tender Moment. I’m especially delighted as well as exceedingly grateful that Jane Austen fan fiction lovers helped A Tender Moment rank #1 Best Seller in Amazon’s Classic Short Stories.

At around 6,500 words, A Tender Moment is indeed short. In fact, it is the shortest story I’ve ever published. There’s a very good reason for its length. It was written for submission to a short stories anthology. I even participated in a SavvyAuthors’ workshop to learn the nuances of effective short story writing.

In the end, I published A Tender Moment as a stand-alone story in October 2014. So, why am I writing about it now? A good number of Jane Austen fan fiction lovers who read and enjoyed A Tender Moment asked for a continuation of the story. I listened, and now I am delighted to present Irrevocably Gone: a charming Pride and Prejudice what-if story which answers readers’ calls for more.

Because A Tender Moment is so short, it has never been available in print—that is, until now. After much deliberation as well as encouragement from my lovely beta readers, I have decided to include A Tender Moment as a complimentary addition to the paperback edition of Irrevocably Gone. A thousand thanks, Betty, Michele, and Deborah.

It’s win-win for readers who may have read A Tender Moment some time ago as well as those who have yet to read the story. For the former, it provides a chance to revisit the story with hardly any inconvenience at all. For the latter, it provides a chance to discover the story for free.

As the story which laid the foundation for Irrevocably Gone, A Tender Moment is indeed a must-read in order to really enjoy this next step in our dear couple’s path to happily ever after.

A special treat awaits eBook readers as well. For a limited time, A Tender Moment is included as a bonus in the digital version of Irrevocably Gone.

With all this talk about A Tender Moment, surely an excerpt is in order. Enjoy!

Darcy caught Elizabeth completely off guard when he asked if he might have the pleasure of dancing with her at some point during the evening.

Her eyes opened wide. If I say no, then I will be obliged to forgo any other requests the rest of the evening, for once a lady denies a gentleman’s request to dance she has no choice but to decline all subsequent entreaties. To do otherwise surely would be fodder for gossip and ridicule. I do not wish to watch everyone else make merriment. I want my share of excitement. Oh, you selfish, selfish man! How dare you put me in this position?

Elizabeth uttered the only thing she could in such a situation as this. “Yes, you may.”

Darcy bowed, she curtsied, and he soon disappeared into the crowd gathered across the room.

Needing time to fret over what had just happened, Elizabeth headed out the double French doors to take in the night air.

What is he thinking in asking me to dance given the manner of our separation just half an hour ago? Does he mean to torment me? Did he expect me to say no, knowing that, if I did, he would have the satisfaction of watching me forego the pleasure of dancing with other gentlemen, gentlemen who are not so wealthy as he is—certainly not so handsome but who are far more kind and considerate?

Having been the one who was standing next to Elizabeth when Mr. Darcy approached them and requested the next set, Elizabeth’s intimate friend, Charlotte Lucas, found Elizabeth standing alone outside. She tried her best to console Elizabeth. “Take heart, dearest Eliza. For what it’s worth, you did the right thing in accepting Mr. Darcy’s petition.”

“As though I had a choice in the matter,” said Elizabeth. “No doubt the sole reason he asked is that he was hoping I would say no; thus ruining what’s left of my evening.” Had it not been for her friend’s opening the instrument in the first place and prevailing upon Elizabeth to perform, perhaps her sister Mary might not have succeeded her and commenced a long concerto. Subsequently, at the request of her younger sisters, Mary had been persuaded to play something conducive to dancing. Some of Charlotte’s family and two or three officers eagerly joined them in dancing. Elizabeth had seen in Mr. Darcy, who stood near them, the silent indignation at such a mode of passing the evening and yet he had prevailed upon her to stand opposite him.

A kind, unpretentious woman, Charlotte shook her head. “I don’t suppose that was his reason at all.”

“Do you have a better explanation?”

“It seems you are handsome enough to tempt the gentleman after all.”

“Oh, Charlotte! How can you make light of my situation? Had the insufferable man arrived mere moments earlier he would have heard my complaints against him for his latest offense.”

“Dearest Eliza, can you not see how much he likes you? While one may rightfully accuse him of sometimes saying the wrong thing at the wrong time, one must suppose that is his way. If you would but give him a chance, I dare say you will find him very agreeable.”

Charlotte and Jane were always endeavoring to give Mr. Darcy the benefit of the doubt tilted in favor of his goodness by virtue of his friendship with Mr. Bingley. I know better.

“I dare say you are no friend at all even to wish such a fate upon me.”


Miss Elizabeth could not possibly have known that she and her friend were not alone on the terrace. Wishing to escape Miss Bingley’s annoying habit of deriding his inclination of admiring Elizabeth as well as her repeated taunts of wishing him joy in his would-be marriage, Darcy sought the solace of the night air while awaiting the next set.

He would not have been the least bit surprised were it Miss Bingley whom Elizabeth was speaking of with Miss Lucas. Bingley’s sister was always rude and condescending towards everyone—especially the Bennets.

Waves of trepidation tinged with a hint of remorse washed over him. Is that how Miss Elizabeth regards me as well? Standing in the shadows, Darcy stared into the distance. The moon that had shown so bright earlier that evening now barely peeped beyond the clouds.

Her opinion of him was even lower than he had supposed. He had no idea that he had made such a horrible impression upon her. Her grievances against him started long before that night, and he had no one to blame but himself.

Perchance she overheard what I said to Bingley that evening at the Meryton assembly. I didn’t mean a word of it. Since then, whenever they were in company, either he was too taciturn and aloof with her or he was fumbling for something to say and never just himself.

It’s truly a wonder she even agreed to dance with me at all. Darcy knew what he must do. Soon I will claim her hand for the promised dance. He was determined to get it right.


A Tender Moment will continue to be available in its eBook edition. You’re welcome to grab a copy today if you’re impatient for more. Or you can reserve a Valentine’s Day date with Mr. Darcy when you pre-order your copy of Irrevocably Gone.

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Giveaway Time

A Tender Moment is a “happy for now” story which allows Darcy and Elizabeth to let go of their pride and prejudice early on in their relationship. Here’s the question. Would you generally consider that a good thing or a bad thing?

Comment below for a chance to win a $5.00 Amazon Gift Card.

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The giveaway contest ends on Tuesday, February 13, 2018.




36 Responses to The Story Continues

  1. It is good to let go of your pride and prejudice to start anew but then it would be a variation instead. Either way, I would enjoy any stories if it is well written. Thanks for the kind offer, Pam.

  2. A very good thing for me. I love when D&E resolve their misunderstandings pretty early, and then build their relationship. Their potential for growth and understanding is one of the major draw as my favorite romantic couple. So if they act like stubborn or petulant children for too long, it starts irritating me.

    Congratulations on the release of your new book Pam. “) When do you have an audiobook version planned? i’ll keep a credit for it. 😉

    • Thanks so much for your kind words, Kate. Great points about D&E and misunderstandings. I hope you’ll love what’s in store for ODC in Irrevocably Gone. An audiobook version of this story would be great. Maybe later this year. Thanks for taking part in the giveaway contest. 🙂

  3. I would certainly like to read a story in which they let go of all those negative impressions and feelings early. I have not read this short story before so would love to read both together. Thanks for the chance and thanks for sharing.

  4. I like the idea that they get together earlier rather than later. Some stories create so many obstacles that they are unrealistic and frustrating. Looking forward to seeing how this story plays out.

    • I’m delighted to know you’re looking forward to reading Irrevocably Gone, Suzanne. I hope you’ll love the story. Thanks so much for taking part in the giveaway. 🙂

  5. For me, it’s great when ODC get together sooner. It’s the whole reason for loving JAFF, more time to spend with D&E. Thanks for offering the giveaway. Can’t wait to read more.

    • I agree, Luisa. The more D&E time the better. I hope you’ll enjoy reading Irrevocably Gone. Thank you for taking part in the giveaway contest. 🙂

  6. It’s on pre-order, it sounded intriguing. I like stories that develope the relationship between ODC earlier and give them some obstacles to overcome together.

    • I’m so glad you’re intrigued by the story premise, Anita. I really hope you’ll love the story. Thanks for taking part in the giveaway contest. 🙂

  7. I do love when they sort out their differences early on and we get to see a deeper relationship form between them!
    These books sound lovely! Thanks for sharing! <3

  8. Regarding your question…. that’s a tough one to answer. Most JAFF devise a twist to prevent FD & EB from connecting. I suppose that if there was no twist, an author would just be recreating the original. And we already have the original, which we love, right? So, without coming up with a reason to keep them apart, FD & EB must get together sooner. But then what will keep us reading? There needs to be some other sort of problem. I have read both sorts of stories, and enjoyed them both, but I think the latter would be more difficult to devise. The main problem with having ODC getting together early is that the plot tends to try to separate them somehow, and typically it’s by undermining Elizabeth’s feelings about their relationship. And those plots tend to become overwrought, and Elizabeth seems to lose her character (i.e. she’s annoying). Some authors are able to do it well, though, and those are fun to read. I look forward to reading these 2 of yours, as I have with all your others.

    • Excellent points, Ginna – especially where the “must-have” separation is concerned. I really hope you’ll enjoy how this one unfolds. Make that ‘appreciate’ how it unfolds. 😉

      Thanks so much for reading and enjoying my stories and taking part in today’s giveaway. 🙂

  9. I do love it when they work out their differences early on and we get to see a deeper relationship form between them. These books sound lovely <3

    • I’m delighted to know you like the story premise, Claire. I hope you’ll love reading Irrevocably Gone and really enjoy ODC’s growing affection for each other. Thanks so much for taking part in the giveaway contest. 🙂

    • I appreciate your kind words, Gail. Thanks so much for reading and enjoying my stories. I hope you’ll love Irrevocably Gone too. Thanks for taking part in the giveaway contest. 🙂

  10. I loved it. Heart-warming and romantic. I adore this romantic version of Darcy, at least until he does the unthinkable… That was deliciously emotional though. Elizabeth was lovely too.

    • Thank you so much for letting me know you loved Irrevocably Gone, Elin. Reading your lovely review was the best part of my day. Heartfelt gratitude. Thanks for taking part in today’s giveaway contest. 🙂

  11. I loved the excerpt. Charlotte is wonderful and I’m so glad she tried to get Elizabeth to see the truth. Thank goodness Mr. Darcy was there and now knows that he has some work to do to make things up to her for his “tolerable” comment.

    • I’m delighted to know how much you enjoyed the excerpt. If you enjoy Charlotte in the excerpt, I think you’ll love her in Irrevocably Gone. Thank you for taking part in the giveaway contest. 🙂

  12. After this excerpt, I can’t wait to read both of these little books! I went right away to Amazon to pre-order, but it only gave me the option to pre-order kindle. I always read printed books, so do hope the print version of these will be out very soon. Would love to win print copies, but if not, I will be watching for them to be available so I can buy.

    • I’m so glad you enjoyed the excerpt, Ann. I’m delighted to know you’re looking forward to owning the paperback edition of Irrevocably Gone. It will be available in a few days. Thanks for taking part in the giveaway contest. 🙂

  13. Oh, yes… a good thing. As an avid reader of JAFF, my frustration is when I read a story that nearly kills me waiting for ODC to get together. I’ve had to wait well into the 90% range before they settle their grievances, their pride and their prejudice. I then only have a few minutes reading of their being together. I love when they get together early and then sharpen their skills fighting for their love by solving problems, taking care of villains, and working their way toward their HEA. I wish you the best in the launch of this book. I enjoyed ‘A Tender Moment’ and look forward to continuing the story. Blessings!!

    • Thanks for letting me know you read and enjoyed A Tender Moment. I hope you’ll enjoy Irrevocably Gone just as much. Thanks for taking part in the giveaway contest. I enjoyed reading your take on ODC getting together sooner rather than later. 🙂

  14. Definitely a good thing in my opinion. I really enjoy books where they get together early and deal with adversity together.

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