A Tale of Two Covers
It’s been a busy month, and I have a lot of news to report!
The big news is that I’ve finished the revisions on Mr. Darcy’s Refuge, and I’m now waiting for the verdict from the first readers as to what may need to be improved or developed further. I get surprisingly anxious waiting for these first reactions, sure that the reason I haven’t heard yet is because they think it’s horrible and are trying to figure out how to break it to me gently. It doesn’t make a lot of sense, since I haven’t had that reaction from editors for any of my first ten books, but it still happens. Meantime, if you want a look, you can read the first chapter on my website.

Original cover

New cover
Rather than chewing my fingernails to the quick, I decided to preserve my sanity by working on the cover for Mr. Darcy’s Refuge. All my Pemberley Variations covers are based on period paintings, and this is no exception. I’d had the painting picked out for months, but as soon as I finished turning it into the front cover, I discovered a painting that worked even better for this particular book. I went back to the drawing board and ended up with two covers I really liked. I couldn’t make up my mind which to use, so I put them out for an opinion on Facebook. And I got opinions by the dozens, but going both ways! Finally I decided I’d use one cover for this book and the other for the next Pemberley Variation, according to whichever painting suited the plot best. The only difficulty was that I only had the vaguest idea of the plot of the next variation!
Obviously, it was time to figure out the plot of the new book, even if I’d just finished the last one the previous day. I sat down with all my usual tools of plotting: pen, notebook, and lots of chocolate to feed my Muse. I started with the first scene , the arrival of the Bingley party at the Meryton assembly, with the addition of two new guests — Mr. and Mrs. George Wickham. Yes, it’s going to be interesting! Within a remarkably short time, I had three pages of detailed notes and the whole plot in my head. Usually I puzzle over plotlines for weeks, but this one just flowed.
Then I was ready to go back to choosing a cover, and now it was easy. Mr. Darcy’s Refuge takes place during a period of torrential rain and flooding (and no, I didn’t foresee the current flooding in England when I wrote it!), and the new cover has storm clouds over the house which serves as the refuge. The newly plotted book takes place at Netherfield, where Darcy originally spoke of the importance of improving a lady’s mind by extensive reading, and 15 year old Georgiana plays a major role, going along with the more child-like appearance of the first cover. All I need now is the title, but I’m not sure my current working title, ‘Wickham is Scum,’ really has the right cachet!
For those of you who are curious, these are the original paintings from which the covers are taken:

The Reader by Jean-Honore Fragonard

Felicite Louise Julie Constance de Durfort by Merry-Joseph Blondel
In other news, the audiobook of Mr. Darcy’s Letter is now available at Audible, iTunes and Amazon. Next up on the audiobook front will be the perennial favorites What Would Mr. Darcy Do and To Conquer Mr. Darcy. And if you’re a Kindle reader, I have some summer specials going on – Mr. Darcy’s Letter is now $4.99, By Force of Instinct is now $3.99, and A Pemberley Medley is $2.99.
I guess it’s time to get back to the new book. I’m now on the part where Elizabeth is staying at Netherfield, and adding in the two new characters is changing her stay quite dramatically!















































































































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Abigail, I prefer the cover on the right if I were to make a choice. As you said, it has rain clouds over an estate which is how I imagine Pemberley to be. So which cover did you choose for Mr Darcy’s Refuge?
Mrs George Wickham? You mean Wickham married before the premise of Pride and Prejudice? I’m curious to know who the bride is and how it affect the whole plot. Do tell more, Abigail.
It’s going to be the cover on the right. As for Mrs. George Wickham — think Ramsgate. It affects the plot a LOT.
Oh…. i see. I think I’ll peek over to your website and read the excerpt.
I eager to hear about Mr. Darcy?s Refuge, will you be posting an excerpt any time soon!
There’s an excerpt on my website. Enjoy!
Thanks for posting an excerpt, Abigail. Can’t wait to find out how the story progresses and hope it ends on a satisfactory note.
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I prefer the one on the right as well. good luck with the new book
Thanks!
I have to say I prefer the original. Maybe because I LOVE that painting.
I love that painting as well. I’ll find a use for it yet!
This is the best news! I’m such a huge fan and can’t wait to read it!
Thanks for the encouragement!
I need to read it asap. I love your work. I remember the contents by the photos or cover art usually so I prefer to go with the best for the plot method. And only you know the whole plot so it’s a good thing you picked what you felt was best and not what others think necessarily. smiles.
I’ll do my best to get it out quickly!
LOVE IT! Totally enthralled with the first chapter. Can’t wait to read the rest!
Thank you! Although I labelled it Chapter 1, it’s in fact the first two chapters because I didn’t want to leave you hanging in the air until it comes out…
I really love the cover with the girl reading! But you’re right in that the stormy sky cover is more suited to MDR. I’m so excited that it’s nearly done and you’re working on the Wickham is Scum book, as well! I’m off to read the excerpt now…
I definitely need a better title for that….
Abigail, it’s never, ever dull with you around, thank goodness! The covers are both beautiful, and I’m happy to know you’ll be able to use both for several projects…actually, just knowing that you’ve got lots of plotting going on is bringing a smile to my face.
Congratulations on the Audiobook! You’re still our pioneer, I see!
Thanks! I’m not the first on the audiobook front, though – Regina’s Phantom of Pemberley is available in audiobook. But I’m #2!
Very nice! I had no idea – Apparently, I’m far too entrenched in motherhood at the moment to be properly informed!
The first chapter of the new book is really intriguing, I can’t wait to read more. I knew I shouldn’t have read the sample, I really want to know what happens now! I think the cover you chose for it was the right choice. Also now looking forward to your Wickham is scum project, LOL, has poor Darcy had to accept Wickham as a brother in law, that would be a struggle, wouldn’t it.
It’s a huge struggle for Darcy to accept Wickham, especially since he has to simultaneously find a way to make sure Wickham doesn’t mistreat Georgiana. It’s a dilemma.
Pretty juicy first chapter, looking forward to it! Mr and Mrs Wickham before the assembly, love it, cant wait.
There’ll be some angsty moments in that one, I think!
I am sure your reviews will be outstanding as always, and can’t wait to get my hands on the new book.
Thank you! I hope everyone likes it.
They are both great images and make lovely covers. However, having read Mr. Darcy’s Refuge – hehehe…. yes, I am rubbing it in! – I can definitely agree that the new one fits best.
I can’t wait to hear more of the new one. Sounds very intriguing! When you are ready for another beta reader you know where to find me.
LOL! Glad you enjoyed the new book and are having fun taunting everyone about it!
I think the one on the left looks the best!
It’s a really tough call because I love them both!
Both covers are great, I have no doubt the new book will be great too! I just finished listening to Mr Darcy’s Letter on audio, love, love, loved it, can’t wait for the new audios too. I always think I will get my fill of reading P&P variations, but I never do!!!
Thank you!!! I’m so glad to hear you loved the audiobook. I’ve been dying to hear reader reactions to it.
What is it about your covers they are so lovely. I love the women from that time period I secretly wanted to be born in that time, back when ladys were called ladies. I would have made Jane Austen proud!!! Love the covers BEAUTIFUL!!!
You would definitely have made Jane Austen proud! One of the side benefits of being a writer is that I get to spend hours looking at Regency era paintings and claim that I’m working.
I can see why you would be torn in your choices. They are both lovely period paintings. Glad you were able to find a solution and now I’m eager for both stories.
Thanks. It was a tough decision.
I prefer the new cover but I do like the old one. Maybe you could use that as the cover for your next book. I read the excerpt of the book on your website and I’m hooked already. When does it come out in the UK or as an e-book?
Glad you liked it. I’m aiming for early September, though it’s possible it’ll be out a little sooner.
I like both covers, Abigail! I really like how well the new cover for Darcy’s Refuge has the storm clouds & fits the book so well! As for the latest WIP, Wickham married! When I first read it, I thought Darcy didn’t get to Georgiane in time, and looks like that is probably what happened! Ooh! Cannot wait to read both of these books!
Yes, that’s what happened, and it gives Wickham all sorts of new ways to play on Elizabeth’s sympathies and turn her against Darcy. Wicked fellow, that Wickham!
I like the new cover. Since her face is cut off that made me look at the other cover and then I liked being able to see the face of the other girl. I read Mr. Darcy’s Obsession last month and enjoyed it. My library didn’t have it but I got it through an interlibrary loan. The character of Charlie (I liked him) made me think of the Baker Street Irregulars who used to work for Sherlock Holmes.
I like to include faces on the cover, but the face on that painting wasn’t right for Elizabeth, so I went for the cut-off style. Glad you liked Charlie! Jenny, the little girl with the broken leg in the new excerpt, reminds me of Charlie sometimes.
Ohh, can’t wait to read Mr.Darcy’s Refuge! Though I decided not to read the excerpt, because I’m sure that after reading it, waiting for the book release will be close to unbearable:)
I liked the new cover for Mr.Darcy’s Refuge more, particularly because of the stormy clouds and the cut-off style (this way I can imagine that it is indeed Elizabeth).
And thank you for sharing your plans for new variation! It will be great to read how Darcy could cope with Wickham as brother-in-law:)
Ohhh, now I really want September to come closer!:)))
Bring it on, Abigail. Just bring it on. As long as you don’t have a Kardashian in regency garb, we’ll all love it.
Either would be lovely, Abigail.
Ive always had a problem with covers i love the covers here in america but sometimes i like the foreign covers for books better
I loved both covers! …but I can’t wait for what’s inside!!!
Both covers would be excellent! For what I have read of the excerpt the right cover seems to fit perfectly. I am very excited with anticipation for the next book to be available.