P&P200: Longbourn Ladies Dress for the Wedding
Elizabeth stood behind Jane carefully pinning her hair up and patiently winding ribbons though the curls.
“This is the last time we will do this, you know,” said Lizzy. “From now on your maid Molly will be fixing your hair.”
“Lizzy, don’t be a goose. We can do this again when we visit,” Jane replied trying to cheer her sister.
“But it will not be the same.”
Just then, Kitty and Mary swept in, giggling as they gathered around.
“What do you think of our new dresses?” asked Kitty, twirling in a circle to display her new pink gown to its fullest advantage. “Mary, show them the beautiful lace on yours.”
Mary was usually the last one to be looked at or admired, and so when her sisters turned to look at her dress, the attention made her blush. Then they realized that something was different about her.
“Mary, you look lovely!” Jane exclaimed. And in fact, she did. Her hair was done more softly around her face making her look less severe. Lavender-colored ribbons, the same color as the flowers on her muslin dress, were wound artfully into her hair.
“I fixed her hair,” cried Kitty. “Did I not do a splendid job of it? For once she did not insist that I pull it back so tightly. I think it does wonders for her face. Why…”
“Please stop talking about me as if I were not here,” Mary said, clearly embarrassed at the compliments she was receiving.
“But, Mary, you look wonderful. In fact, I have never seen you look better.” Impulsively Elizabeth pulled her blushing sister into a hug.
“I think entirely too much is made of how young ladies look. It is our more substantive qualities and accomplishments that are most important,” Mary pronounced.
“Yes, however, it does not hurt if the outside is just as lovely, too,” Jane said, putting a reassuring hand on Mary’s arm.
“We should be talking about you and Lizzy today. After all, it is your wedding day,” said Mary, clearly trying to deflect the conversation away from herself.
“What do you think of what I have done with Jane’s hair?” Elizabeth asked, returning to the subject at hand.
“I think you should add more ribbons,” Kitty suggested.
“And I think it is perfect as it is,” said Mary with a rare smile. “She does not need more ribbons to enhance her natural beauty.”
“Thank you, Mary, dear. Now enough fussing about me; it is your turn, Lizzy.” Jane stood up and offered the seat to her sister.
“Yes, we should all help with Lizzy’s hair!” At that, Kitty nudged her sister into the chair and picked up the brush.
As Kitty worked diligently over her Elizabeth’s dark locks, her sisters giggled with excitement, sometimes all talking at the same time.
“Are you anxious about tonight?” Kitty asked nonchalantly. They all looked at her with wide eyes. “Well, it is what we are all thinking about, is it not?”
The response was nervous giggles and blushes all around.
“You know that is not a proper topic of discussion for unmarried ladies,” Mary scolded.
“Oh, do not be such a bore, Mary. When Lydia was here after her wedding, she told me all about it — how terrifying the marital bed is and all the indelicate things a husband…well, expects,” Kitty said with a gulp.
Jane and Elizabeth looked at each other with their eyebrows raised.
“Although I am certain that Mr. Darcy and Mr. Bingley would never behave in such a manner,” she quickly added.
There was another awkward silence.
“Oh, heavens, Kitty! You surely did not believe everything she told you,” Elizabeth exclaimed.
“Why not? She is now a married woman and knows all about the conjugal mysteries we are not even allowed to think about,” Kitty told them.
After a moment of silence, Lizzy spoke. “I cannot go into details, but Jane and I had a letter from Lydia sharing her ‘married woman’ wisdom. I am certain what she said had at least some elements of truth to it, but it was certainly nothing at all like what Aunt Gardiner has told us to expect. The words ‘terrifying’ and ‘indelicate’ were never mentioned at all.”
Another moment of complete silence followed during which all of the Bennet girls considered the situation. First, Lizzy started to laugh, then Jane and Mary and finally, Kitty. They laughed until tears rolled down their cheeks, and they were holding their sides. Mary and Kitty leaned on each other for support just to stand. Mary pulled out her handkerchief and patted her eyes.
When at last they were able to be coherent again, Mary said, “You know Lydia is in Newcastle right this moment laughing even harder than we are at the little joke she thinks she has played on you.”
“I was under the distinct impression you believed her, too, Mary,” Kitty replied a little indignantly.
Mary frowned. “I did not.”
“Oh, at moment like this, I do wish Lydia was here with us,” said Jane wiping away the last of her tears with the back of her hand.
“Yes, so I could get my hands around her little neck,” said Kitty, stifling another giggle. “In spite of everything, I do miss her sometimes though.”
“Do you also miss chasing men in red coats or running wild at parties so that we are all mortified with shame?” Mary asked.
Kitty turned serious. “No, Mary, my eyes are wide open now. It has become very clear to me that I was following the wrong sister. I only hope Lizzy and Jane will allow me to spend more time with them. I would prefer to learn to be a lady – just as they are.” Her eyes began to twinkle with mischief. “Then, perhaps, I will catch a rich husband, too.”
Jane was the first to put an arm around Kitty, and then Elizabeth joined them. After Mary was waved over, she finally came and put her arms around her sisters.
“This is more like it – true sisterly affection. I love all of you very much, and you will always be welcome at Pemberley,” said Elizabeth. Then she added with a note of humor in her voice, “That is, as soon as I actually manage to learn my way around my new home. It is so large that I know I shall be in constant terror of becoming lost. Why, the house has so many hallways and stairways that I might need to use a ball of thread like Theseus in the Minatour’s Labyrinth. It would be too embarrassing if Mr. Darcy had to send out the footmen or maids looking for me.”
“It might be much more fun if Mr. Darcy went looking for you himself,” Kitty said with a giggle.
“Kitty! Where do you get these ideas? ” Elizabeth cried as she broke into laughter again and her sisters joined her.
“Oh, look at the time! We must hurry! We have only a few minutes before we leave for the church, and there is still so much to do!” Jane told them.
Suddenly, tears formed in Mary’s eyes.
“What is it, my dear Mary? This is not like you. Are you unwell?” asked Jane moving quickly to put an arm around her sister.
Mary tried looking at the floor to hide the tears and shook her head. Jane put a gentle finger under Mary’s chin and lifted it. The watery pools that were forming seemed to magnify and distort her golden brown eyes. Instead of pulling away, as she normally did in a situation such as this, Mary smiled through the tears as Jane used a linen handkerchief to blot her sister’s eyes.
“I am so very happy for you, but after today, you will belong more to your husbands than to us. It will all be so different,” Mary told them between sniffles.
“We have talked about this before. We are sisters — forever and always. That is something that no wedding can change.”
“I know that.”
“Then what is it?” Elizabeth asked. “Are you afraid that you will never fall in love and get married?”
“Oh, romance is for other people, not for me,” Mary said, trying to sound serious.
“That does not have to be true, sweetheart, but for love to have a chance, you must open your heart and see the possibilities. If I had not taken the time to get to know Mr. Darcy, I might never have discovered all of his fine qualities. He would have passed out of my life as an enigmatic figure, a puzzle never to be solved, and I would be the poorer for it,” Elizabeth told her.
Mary managed a smile. “I shall remember your advice.”
“Come here, Mary, let me fix your face so those tears do not show. We cannot have all of Meryton saying that the brides’ sisters were crying even before the wedding. They might think you are not happy for us.”
“I am happy for you. Truly.” Mary hugged Jane.
Then in the distance, they heard their mother’s shrill voice calling, “Girls, girls! The carriages are here. You must come at once!”
Scrambling, they picked up bonnets, gloves and other little accoutrements. Jane, Kitty, and Mary rushed off leaving Elizabeth as the last one out. After a brief look around the room, she smiled and closed the door on this part of her life.
Susan Mason-Milks
Susan is the author of "Mr. Darcy's Proposal," a Jane Austen "what if" story. She is currently working on another "what if" which she hopes to have out in the summer of 2013.
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I love how you portrayed both the younger sisters particularly Mary. I always felt a little sorry for her.
Loved this vignette!
I wanted to show that the experience of their older sisters is changing even the younger ones outlook on life. Thank you!
Beautiful!!!
I’m already in tears and we are not at the wedding yet.
I’m looking forward to the wedding, too. I have a piece coming up later today after the wedding that shows Bingley and Jane’s wedding night. Darcy and Elizabeth aren’t the only ones who love each other passionately!
Here come the brides…!!
I can hear the traditional music in my head although in the early 1800s I don’t think they played the same music we associate with weddings.
Awww, Mary… maybe she will catch the eye of her special someone today, since she’s all dressed up and bribboned and primed for romance!
To the church we go!
I do think Mary is someone who could really blossom into a lovely young lady if only she’d stop being so severe – both in personality and appearance!
Hey, Monica, do you remember last spring we had a conversation about my vignette of Elizabeth reading Darcy’s letter? I can’t figure out how we “talked.” I wanted to ask you something about that again. If you’d contact me through FB messaging, or twitter, or using the my email address on the author page on AuAu web site, it would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!
Yes! I do remember and it popped into my head again the other day. I don’t have a FB but we did DM on twitter about it (@jaffobsession). I’ll send you a message
Love it that you managed to show there are five sisters even though there are four present. Even in absentia, Lydia’s personality comes through. Well done!!!
I thought it would be just like Lydia to play that sort of joke on her sisters. She’s definitely there even if only in spirit on a day like this. Thanks, Nina!
Charming ! Thank you.
My pleasure! Thank you!
I love that Kitty and Mary are really trying here and Kitty realizes who she needs to imitate. Thank goodness she finally woke up, and Mary actually looking pretty. Reminds me of my own wedding and the fun we had together before getting ready, including my mom trying to dress up my older sister so she can meet someone hopefully. Sigh…..
Mary gets left out of things so often – mostly by her own doing – but she’s still one of their sisters and they love her and want the best for her.
I love the interactions with sisters! Love and giggles, serious and playful. I have 6 sisters and it reminds me of some wonderful moments of my own. Well done, Susan!!
Thank you! I started out with Lizzy and Jane getting ready and then the all sisters took over and told me what they wanted me to write!
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i loved it…particularly the ending
Thank you for reading and commenting!
A lovely vignette, Susan! Lizzy’s advice to Mary was so sweet…
Thank you! I think Mary deserves a happy ending, too. Maybe someday!
What a lovely sisterly scene. I especially liked what you did with Mary, it’s obvious that there was always hope that Kitty would improve, nice to see some positive development for Mary too!
Shannon Winslow has a new book coming out after the first of the year sometime that’s mostly Mary’s story of finding love. It’s called “Return to Longbourn.” I’ve read a preview and I think you’ll like it. Keep an eye out for it’s launch in Feb or March.
Yay I can see that >Kitty has changed
Very nice sisterly bonding before the big event. I remember my sisters helping me with my hair on my wedding day… It’s a great memory.
Writing this made me think of a friend of mine who had three sisters. I don’t have sisters so being around my friend’s family was as close as I got.
“It might be much more fun if Mr. Darcy went looking for you himself,” Kitty said with a giggle.
If I get lost, will someone please send D to look for me????
I agree. If I thought Darcy would come find me, I’d arrange to get lost!
Awe… I really like your version of the Bennet sisters… esp Mary, but Kitty too. It makes me want more for your Mary than her staying at home with her parents till she marries her uncle’s clerk (JA’s fate for her). This Mary deserves to find love and happiness. And, in your Kitty, I can see the beginnings of the girl who one day goes off to Pemberley and attracts the notice of Darcy’s parson. She’s a sweet girl.
Thank you for this lovely glimpse of the Bennet sisters.
Thank you! I have great hope for Kitty and even Mary. Unfortunately, Lydia is probably beyond hope at this point. But how like her to try to scare her sisters with tales of marital mysteries!
That was so touching…I’m writing this through my tears. One door closes but another opens for Elizabeth and Jane. For Lydia one door slammed shut but for Mary and Kitty there is time to grow and blossom. Girls, girls, make haste! There is a wedding to attend!
I think there’s hope for all of them – except perhaps Lydia. In one version of this I had Mary moralizing about Lydia but it sort of spoiled the scene to mention that so I cut it. I do love the idea of Lydia playing a joke from afar, though.
I hope Mary finds love someday! So glad Kitty realized the truth, “It has become very clear to me that I was following the wrong sister.”
Oh, and I loved the ending! Can’t wait to see what comes next!!
Thanks, Jakki!
Loved it.. Always love when Kitty realizes she’s been following the wrong sister!
It’s good to see that Lydia’s influence is disappearing so fast.
This was loads of fun to read, Susan.
It was fun to write, too.
It was so good of you to write about Mary in so touching a way! I loved it, Susan! Mary is so often overlooked!