P&P200 — Elizabeth’s Letter to Mrs. Gardiner
Elizabeth paused in thought and worry. Not that this wasn’t an appropriate beginning for a letter, but she was at odds with herself as to what the next line should be. Mentally, she tried out a few possibilities:
I’ve been meaning to ask you about some specifics regarding Lydia’s wedding. Aside from you and Uncle Gardiner, the minister and the bride and groom, of course, who else was there?
No, that made her query too openended and it was, in fact, not what she desperately wished to know.
I’d heard some mention of Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy being in attendance at my youngest sister’s wedding. Could that be true?
Better, but her aunt could merely confirm or deny his presence. Elizabeth needed to know WHY he was there.
Why on earth was Mr. Darcy — of all people! — at my sister Lydia’s wedding?!! What possessed you to invite him? Or did he just barge into the ceremony? And for what reason? And for how long? What did he say or do? Tell me everything!
Ah, that was exactly what Elizabeth wanted to write, but it sounded a bit, well, on the verge of hysterics…even just on paper.
Still, her curiosity on the subject was too powerful to be denied. What was the meaning of Mr. Darcy’s attendance at the wedding? Her mind raced for a way to broach her inquiries with tact and delicacy. But ten, twelve, fifteen entire seconds went by and she was no closer to finding the perfect phrasing and, let’s face it, Elizabeth knew patience was hardly her strong suit.
She snatched the pen and hastily scribbled:
My sister Lydia had let slip that Mr. Darcy was gathered with you all at the wedding, but she likewise revealed that his attendance was not intended to be generally known. You may readily comprehend what my curiosity must be to know how a person unconnected with any of us, and (comparatively speaking) a stranger to our family, should have been amongst you at such a time. Pray write instantly and let me understand it — unless it is, for very cogent reasons, to remain in the secrecy which Lydia seems to think necessary; and then I must endeavour to be satisfied with ignorance.
“Not that I shall, though,” Elizabeth added to herself, as she quickly brought her note to a close. “And my dear aunt,” she muttered, “if you do not tell me in an honourable manner, I shall certainly be reduced to tricks and stratagems to find out.”
With that, she sealed her letter and called for Hill. She wanted this to be posted at once.
Then she just held her breath…waiting…
Marilyn Brant
Marilyn Brant is a National Bestselling Author of Contemporary Women's Fiction and Romantic Comedy. She's published seven novels including ACCORDING TO JANE, which was a #1 Kindle Bestseller, won RWA's Golden Heart Award and was named one of Buzzle.com's "100 Best Romance Novels of All Time." She also wrote PRIDE, PREJUDICE AND THE PERFECT MATCH, which was a Top 100 bestselling book on Amazon in the "Humor" category.
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I think I would have been the same way. Patience is NOT my strong suit. LOL I’ve always thought that this is the first time Elizabeth thought there might be a drop of hope for seeing Darcy again. When they had last parted, she was convinced that she should never see him again because he couldn’t get out of her presence fast enough. Yet, here he is, apparently attending the wedding of his enemy and her scandalized sister? Love it.
Stephanie,
And, yeah, patience isn’t my strong suit either, LOL.
I *know*!!! I think you’re absolutely right about Lizzy feeling that little bit of hope…the fact that Darcy was interacting with her family in *any* way had to have been a shock…
Ha! How clever of Lizzy to threaten her aunt with using tricks and stratagems if Mrs. G doesn’t tell Elizabeth what she wants to know. Thanks for the insight on Lizzy’s letter!
Thanks, Jakki!!
— but I loved getting to imagine more of that scene for myself. I can only speculate on how desperate Lizzy was for news from her aunt!!
I don’t get to take credit for the tricks and stratagems line — that was pure Austen
p.s. It looked like the Decatur Book Festival was tons of fun!
Always been wanting to have an idea what elizabeth wrote to her aunt
Thanks so much, Patricia!!
I figured Elizabeth was burning with curiosity…I would be, too!
I love Elizabeth’s internal dialogue as she composes the letter and that little bit at the end showing her determination.
Thanks for a great vignette!
Sophia,
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I’m so glad you enjoyed it!!
Thank you for taking time to tell me so
RL keeping me bussy was not able to finish reading till today. was very entertained.
Oh, Suze, I hear you on the RL busy-ness… I’ve been swamped these past few days, too.
Really glad you liked my little P&P piece!
Thank you.