P&P200: Colonel Fitzwilliam Learns of Darcy’s Engagement
(November 6, 1812)
On a cold November afternoon, Colonel the Honorable Richard Fitzwilliam jauntily ascended the steps of Darcy House in London. His knock on the door was swiftly answered.
“Ah, Thacker, has my cousin returned?”
The butler glanced at the door. The colonel was a constant and welcomed guest at Darcy House, but the knocker was not in evidence, a clear sign that the family was unavailable to visitors.
The colonel laughed. “Oh, do not bother, old man.” He moved inside the vestibule. “I will just call on Miss Georgiana.” He handed the imperturbable servant his hat and gloves and was removing his coat when a tall gentleman made his appearance.
“I thought I heard your voice, Richard,” said a smiling Fitzwilliam Darcy, his hand extended in welcome.
“Darce! You have returned and looking exceedingly well, I might add. Now, where the devil have you been? What have you been up to?”
“Come into my study, Fitz. Your arrival is most timely if you mean to stay for dinner.”
“Of course! You would not throw your poor cousin upon the mercy of the kitchens of Horse Guards, would you? The horses eat better!”
Darcy harrumphed. “I seriously doubt that the Crown’s food is that deficient, but we will suffer your company. Thacker, be so good as to alert Cook that we have a guest for dinner.” The butler nodded as the two gentlemen continued down the hall.
“You have not answered my question,” Fitzwilliam pointed out. “You have been gone for a month. Did you return to Pemberley?”
Darcy’s response was lost to posterity, for at that instant, a pretty young lady dashed from the music room.
“RICHARD!” cried Georgiana Darcy. “Oh Richard, have you heard the news?” She leapt into an embrace with her cousin and guardian. “Brother is getting married!”
Fitzwilliam was dumbfounded. “Married?” His arms full of Georgiana, he peered over her head at Darcy. “To whom?”
Butter would not melt in Darcy’s grinning mouth. “You are acquainted with the lady—Miss Elizabeth Bennet.”
Thirty minutes later, the two gentlemen were comfortably ensconced in Darcy’s study with cigars and wine, a roaring fire in the grate, and Georgiana was upstairs changing for dinner.
“Now that you have successfully distracted me with cigars and wine,” said Fitzwilliam presently, “shall you tell me how things came to pass? Engaged to Miss Bennet? I am all astonishment!”
“I thought you had some wind of it. You must have seen evidence of my admiration in Kent.”
“I thought I saw something, but to this degree? No. You have been very sly.”
“Not in the least. I must wonder at your astonishment; surely my aunt spoke to the earl last month.”
“I have not heard anything, and I would be surprised if I did. You know Father and Aunt Catherine hate each other. But why would—oh!” Fitzwilliam frowned. “She knew? You told Lady Catherine of your intentions and not me?”
“Peace, Cousin! It was not so much a matter of telling her as her finding out.”
Mollified, the colonel sat back. “How did that come about? Anne?”
“No, I did not tell Anne, either.” He imparted the story of Lady Catherine’s journey to Longbourn, her confrontation with Elizabeth, and her attempt to warn Darcy off. By the time Darcy finished his tale, the colonel was excessively diverted.
“Ho, this is rich! The old bat thought she would have you bend to her will, but in all probability, she drove you right into Miss Bennet’s arms! How Father will laugh when he learns of this!”
Darcy sat up. “Must you tell him?”
“Of course! I can keep nothing from him—especially if I wish to stay in his best books. My allowance depends upon it!” At Darcy’s dark look, Fitzwilliam sobered and patted his cousin’s knee. “It would be all for the best, Darce. You cannot think he will look kindly on your betrothal to a county lady of no note.”
Darcy ground his teeth. “Elizabeth is a gentleman’s daughter; we are equals.”
“Do not be foolish! You know this will disrupt his plans for you. However, I can be of service. As much as he dislikes being thwarted, he enjoys thwarting Auntie Cathy more! The very fact that our aunt disapproves of Miss Bennet will raise her in my father’s eyes.”
Darcy was hardly mollified. “I will stand no disrespect for Elizabeth.”
Fitzwilliam almost laughed at the image Darcy presented—glowering face, arms crossed over his chest. Why, if only he bit his lip, he would be the perfect picture of an angry, stubborn child. “Miss Elizabeth is charming. She will win over Father in no time, and Mother too, I have no doubt.”
“And the viscount?”
Fitzwilliam’s smile faded. “That will be a harder task. You know how much stock my dear sister Eugenie puts in appearances, and Andrew follows wherever she leads.” The colonel’s and the viscountess’ mutual loathing was well-known within the family. “However, Father demands a unified public front in all things. Win his acceptance and the rest of the family will fall in line—including Lady Catherine.”
Darcy relaxed. “My uncle is a reasonable man. I am satisfied. I shall write him presently. He is still in Derbyshire, I recall.” He took a sip of his wine. “Shall you attend the wedding? If so, I would ask you to escort Georgiana.”
Fitzwilliam nodded. “I shall be happy to if I am granted leave. After all, someone must represent the family. It certainly will not be Lady Catherine.” He frowned. “I wish Anne could… but that is nonsense. Her health would not allow it, even if by some miracle our aunt gave permission.”
The two sat for some time, drinking, the crackling fire the only sound in the room.
“Darcy,” Fitzwilliam began again, “are you certain about this? Please understand I am only concerned with your happiness. Miss Bennet is all that is lovely and charming, but—”
Darcy held up a hand. “Fitz, I am certain. I shall not change my mind—I shall marry Elizabeth.” He sighed. “It is hard for me to speak of this. In her presence, I feel—calm. Complete. At peace. I find she is as necessary to me as food and drink. I do not think I can now live without her, knowing I have finally won her tender affections.”
“Have you?”
“She says I have, and I believe her.” He chuckled. “I certainly know my fortune means little to her!”
Fitzwilliam frowned, the source of his misgivings now on the table. “Forgive me, Darce, but how do you know that?”
Darcy laughed out loud. “Because she turned me down at Rosings!”
“What?”
Darcy ignored his cousin’s inelegant outburst and gave an abbreviated recounting of his misadventure in the parsonage at Easter. “So you see?” he concluded his tale. “If she were mercenary, she would have accepted my boorish proposal, and I never would have been the wiser until it was too late! But she had mercy on me and taught me a hard lesson on what it takes to please a woman worthy of being pleased.”
“Apparently, you have learned this lesson.”
“I will endeavor to put my better understanding to good use for the remainder of my days.”
Normally, Fitzwilliam would have disregarded such a statement as mere hyperbole had it come from any other man. “She has bewitched you, has she not?”
“I am a better man for knowing her.”
Fitzwilliam raised his glass and offered a toast. “Then I wish you joy with all my heart.”
Darcy’s eyes were suspiciously moist. “Thank you, Fitz. Your words mean more to me than I can say.” He gathered himself and stood. “Shall we to dinner? Georgiana is surely waiting for us by now.”
Fitzwilliam grinned, already relishing whatever arts Darcy’s cook was to employ that evening. “Excellent! Lead the way, Cuz.” And if what you say about Miss Elizabeth is true, Darce, I shall love her as if she were my own sister, he thought to himself.
Jack Caldwell
Jack Caldwell -- The Cajun Cheesehead -- is an author, amateur historian, professional economic developer, playwright, and like many Cajuns, a darn good cook. He is the author of PEMBERLEY RANCH, THE THREE COLONELS, and MR. DARCY CAME TO DINNER.
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Very satisfying read!
Thank you, Nina.
Jack – I loved the banter of Colonel Fitzwilliam and Mr. Darcy. It is very much how I imagined their conversation. I’ve always felt the gentlemen had a healthy competition with each other. Great Writing! –Leslie
Aww Colonel Studmuffin…gotta love him. And I love the way you write both him and Darcy. Thanks Jack!
That’s our Studmuffin.
Well, Leslie, I always thought there was some competition between Fitz and Darcy. Fitz has the name, but Darcy has the money. Still, they are like brothers. The question is, who’s the older one?
Lovely
And I liked that he was not sure about her
I always thought he would be uncertain. After all, Fitzwilliam didn’t really know Lizzy but for their few conversations at Rosings.
This was a lot of fun to read, thanks for sharing!
Thanks, Chelsea.
I do so admire the way you write. I could read about your Colonel Fitzwilliam constantly (and yes, I’ve read your book, the 3 C’s and totally enjoyed it). I love how you portray their friendship and how the Colonel was watching out for D’s best interests. Great piece, thank you!
Then you’ll like my upcoming ROSINGS PARK.
When will we be able to get our paws on Rosings Park? The book, not the house, although I’d love to have that, too.
I’m working on it now. Maybe in 2013 (fingers crossed).
Very exciting!
Enjoyed it very much!!
Nice of you to say so, Suze.
Great piece! Love your Col and his interactions!
The colonel is a great foil for Darcy, don’t you think?
Colonel Fitzwilliam is one of my favorite characters. So fun to see the interactions between him and Darcy. Love it!
He’s one of my favorites, too.
You write a great Colonel Fitzwilliam, Jack. I love his doubts here, and how Darcy is able to reassure him.
You write a great Colonel Fitzwilliam, too, Abigail, especially in MR. DARCY’S REFUGE (huge shameless plug!)
I never thought about how Elizabeth’s refusal of his proposal at Rosing’s would have shown him that she really was not interested in his money.
I really hope that all these P&P 200′s are put in a book that can be bought.
Funny you should say that… (hint, hint)
Afterall, who doesn’t enjoy thwarting the “old bat!”
Love it. Amy Z
Bat thwarting is an old and beloved sport of the Fitzwilliam family.
I really love how we see more of Colonel Fitzwilliam’s personality come through here in the relationship between him and Darcy. Great read.
Well, it takes a guy to know a guy.
Excellent vignette, Jack. Thanks for this. I love conversations between Darcy and the Colonel. You’ve captured them both so well.
Thanks, Susan M-M.
I really loved this!
Thank you.
I really enjoyed this Jack, I can just imagine it happening
Oh, are you reading my mind? LOL!
What a lovely scene. I love your Colonel too. I love that he’s looking out for Darcy.
Thanks Jack.
Lisa, thanks.
Auntie Cathie? Love it Jack and of course your 3 C’s. Looking forward to your next book and more on Colonel Fitzwilliam.
I’m working on it even now.
I’ve always imagined these two are very much like brothers and not cousins. I like how your writing brings this out.
Thanks for the vignette.
Thanks. I enjoyed writing it.
Loved all of this but here — “Why, if only he bit his lip, he would be the perfect picture of an angry, stubborn child.” — I howled. Best way to start my day!!
You have Colonel Fitzwilliam pegged. I love the characterization.
Great job, Jack! I always enjoy your Colonel Fitzwilliam!
That was a very enjoyable read. Leave it to the Colonel to be so reasonable…smiles. He definitely points out the obstacles. Thankfully he came up with a couple positives too. It’s nice to see a man stick up for his intended with such poetry of mind and voice. Good going Darcy!
I enjoyed reading this scene, Jack, especially the easy camaraderie between Darce and Fitz. I’m off to continue reading the other posts.