P&P200: Lord Fitzwilliam Visits the Bride and Groom

Note: Antony, Lord Fitzwilliam, the current Earl Fitzwilliam and Darcy’s cousin, is an original character. If you have read my novels, you will be familiar with this scamp who doesn’t take anything too seriously and who drives his staid cousin crazy.

Arm-in-arm, Mr. and Mrs. Fitzwilliam Darcy walked the gardens on their first full day at Pemberley. The previous day, they had arrived at the manor house just as the sun was dipping below the horizon. Nearly exhausted from the wedding breakfast and their travels, the two had dined on a light supper before retiring for the night. After making love, they were quickly asleep in each other’s arms.

Since Elizabeth’s first visit to Pemberley in August, the gardens had been completely transformed, with vivid yellows, oranges, and reds replacing the softer pastels of a warmer season. There was also another difference. When Lizzy had first admired the gardens, she did so as Elizabeth Bennet, a woman who was contemplating the very real prospect of spinsterhood, having rejected the marriage proposal of Fitzwilliam Darcy at the Hunsford parsonage. Instead, she had returned—triumphantly—as the Mistress of Pemberley.

As they walked the pebbled paths, Elizabeth’s role as the mistress of such a great estate was very much on her mind. Her husband was attempting to reassure her that she was more than equal to the task of lady of the manor when they heard the sound of a carriage coming down the drive. From the noise it was making, they knew the conveyance was substantial, and Lizzy wondered aloud who their visitor might be.

“Good grief!” Darcy said as he caught site of the carriage with its two matched pairs of white stallions. With that exasperated exclamation, Lizzy knew who their visitor was: William’s cousin, Lord Fitzwilliam, the black sheep of the Fitzwilliam clan, an unrepentant reprobate and willing fodder for London’s scandal sheets.

Through gritted teeth, Darcy declared that he was not ready to return to the house. “And until we are, Antony can amuse himself. It is so easily done.” Pulling Elizabeth by her hand, he turned in a direction away from the manor.

“William, I know you are unhappy with your cousin’s unexpected arrival, but, really, it is our responsibility to make him welcome,” Lizzy said, trying to keep up with her husband.

“But he is not welcome. He has come for one of two reasons: to make sport at my expense because I am newly married or to find relief from his creditors by hiding out in Derbyshire. In the first instance, he shall fail because I am happy to be married. As for the second reason, he knows better than to ask me for money.”

There was a third possibility. His wife, a woman he referred to as the Evil Eleanor, had prevailed—again—in one of their epic rows, and he had to run for his life.

“William, is it not possible that he has come to wish us joy?”

“If that was his purpose, then he should have attended the wedding breakfast. Although I did not invite him, you did!”

In the whole of England, there were few who could get a rise out of Fitzwilliam Darcy, but one of those people was now moving his considerable luggage into a guest bedchamber at Pemberley.

* * *

“You can stay the night, but that is it,” Darcy said by way of greeting his cousin.

“I am very happy to see you, too, my dearest Fitzwilliam,” Antony said, chuckling. After taking Elizabeth’s hand, he pressed it against his lips and allowed them to linger.

“If you were so keen to see us, why did you not go to the wedding breakfast?” Darcy barked. “And please remove your lips from my wife’s hand.”

“The reason I did not attend the wedding was because it is the height of rudeness to outshine the bride,” Antony said in a serious voice. “Or so I was told by my wife on our wedding day.”

In an age of men’s fashion dictated by the immaculate Beau Brummel, Lord Fitzwilliam, wearing an embroidered coat, hose, and high-heeled shoes with jeweled buckles, much preferred the more ornate dress of an older generation. For the earl, “fitting in” was never a desired outcome.

“William, Milord, shall we continue this conversation in a room where there are chairs?” Lizzy asked, leading the men from the foyer to the drawing room.

“Elizabeth, if you don’t mind, I would like to speak to my cousin in private,” Darcy said.

“Well, I mind,” Antony immediately answered. “If you leave, my dear, I shall be subjected to one of William’s sermon, and I get preached to on Sunday.”

“Nonsense!” William answered, his voice nearly a shout.  ”The last time you were in a church, it was struck by lightning.” It also happened to be Antony’s wedding day.

“I shall see to the refreshments,” Lizzy said, backing out of the room, leaving the two bulls to lock horns.

“Antony, you cannot stay here. I have no intention of beginning my married life with you causing mischief at every opportunity.”

“William, William, William. I am not moving in. I am merely paying a call to wish you and your delightful bride connubial bliss.”

“I would be more likely to believe you if you didn’t travel with enough baggage to furnish the court at Windsor,” Darcy harrumphed. “And the length of this visit will be…?”

“That depends on you.”

“All right. How much do I need to pay to make you go away?” When Antony told him the amount required to satisfy his most pressing creditors, Darcy agreed to advance him the sum. “When do you leave?”

“Another fifty pounds, and I shall be gone by first light.”

“Done.”

Your comments are always welcome.

 

Mary Simonsen

Mary Simonsen is the author of several Pride and Prejudice and Jane Austen re-imaginings. She is also the author of two British police procedurals, A Killing in Kensington and Three's a Crowd.

26 Responses to P&P200: Lord Fitzwilliam Visits the Bride and Groom

  • I love Antony, but he hasn’t changed one jot! I can see he has no shame in blackmailing Darcy out of 50 pounds. Thank you, Mary!

  • BeckyC says:

    Ah yes, Antony! I remember him well. And he has not changed a bit! Opportunist as he is….he knew when to hit Darcy, probably the only time he could actually get money out of him!lol. He planned that quite nicely. Love it, Mary!

  • KatrinW says:

    Oh, another morning with new P&P200. :mrgreen: Thank you. :smile:

  • What a delightful villain, Mary! Enjoyed reading this.

  • Jakki L. says:

    Loved this! I just adore Antony & you have truly delivered him here for us! Very wise way to extract money from Darcy!

  • Mary Simonsen says:

    Hello everyone. Thank you for joining me and the bad boy of my novels. I love writing about Antony, and I’m pleased that you like him as well. :)

  • Sophia Rose says:

    Oh my lord! I love Antony. How do you keep from going nuts with him knocking around in your head? And this new side to Darcy around this cousin is fun because of the way he is riled.

    Nice vignette, Mary!

  • Lisa S says:

    LOL! I just love Antony. He is so funny. The thing I like about him as the ‘bad guy’ is that his spirit doiesn’t trike me as cold, dark, or mean. He’s naughty but he’s not evil. :) Thanks for sharing Mary.

    • Lisa S says:

      Talk about a bad typing job. I do try to check what leaves my fingers before I hit post but obviously I failed in my job this time. :) I was trying to say ‘his spirit doesn’t strike me’.

  • Hahahah! I love how Antony has gotten Darcy to do what the latter stated he wouldn’t do in a blink of an eye! What a scamp!!!

  • Aley says:

    Coming to wish them bliss with enough luggage for Windsor. What a hoot.

  • Krista says:

    I know everyone can’t stand Anthony for getting money. But you have to hand it too him!!! Sometimes I find myself cheering on the villian why is that? Lisa I would agree naughty by not evil :oops: Love this post!!!

  • Mary Simonsen says:

    Oh, I am so pleased to see that you all like Antony. He really is harmless. If he wasn’t an earl, he’d still be the guy you loan money to. Thanks, everyone, for reading my vignette.

  • Oh ho ho! Visiting newlyweds the next morning…Antony is bold! Love how he gets under Darcy’s skin (I of course feel bad for poor Mr. Darcy), it is such good entertainment! Thank you for the laughs, Mary! I still think Lord Antony would make an interesting protagonist of his own novel (or would he be the antagonist there too?) ;)

  • blodeuedd says:

    Anthony Anthony *shakes head’

  • Monica P says:

    Hahaha – well done, Antony, as always! I love him, he’s the most loveable scoundrel ever.

  • Stephanie L says:

    Antony…LOL He didn’t bring his lady friend or the girls so he MUST need money… :lol:

  • Mary Simonsen says:

    You are all wonderful! Thanks for your comments. I LOVE reading them.

  • Denise says:

    What a troublemaker….interloper on the honeymoon? Really?

  • Carole says:

    Who else would dare invade Pemberley at such a time! Antony knows Darcy well and played him well. Yes he is a scamp! Great vignette and I don’t want P&P 200 to end!

  • suzan says:

    I agree with Carole completely. He knew exactly when to go to Pemberley for his own benefit.

  • Jan Ashe says:

    what delightful fun – at Darcy’s expense, literally and figuratively .. lol. Thank you for such an uplifting post!

    more Antony, please!

  • Danielle says:

    Lol…..it seems every family has one of these. :mrgreen:

  • JuneA** says:

    I’m surprised that Mr. Darcy didn’t toss Antony out on his ear… I want to say poor Antony, but really it is poor Darcy! Thanks Mary!

  • SuzeJA says:

    Enjoyed Antony very much, thanks

  • The excerpt was delightful, Mary.

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