Fighting with Caroline Bingley, and a giveaway

Fighting with Caroline Bingley, and a giveaway

I did it! I finished a series! 

The Darcy Marriage Series Book 3 has been available for sale for a couple weeks. Called Caroline’s Censure, excerpts of it were posted on my blog for a few weeks, and it was posted in rough draft form at DarcyandLizzy. It tells the tale of Caroline Bingley’s attempt to come between Our Dear Couple.

I think I told you already that writing a series was a big step for me. It turned out to be a difficult journey, but one I learned a lot from. If you follow my personal blog, Austen Promises, you know that I posted in my Writer’s Journal about it.

One of the things that may or may not have made it into that post (I’m lucky I remember my name from one day to the next, much less the contents of one blog post out of many) is that Caroline fought me tooth and nail the entire time I was writing. The book took more than twice as long to write as I anticipated, because Caroline, hag that she is, would not allow me to tell her story. It was not until I discussed the plot with a friend who gave me some ideas that I was able to shut the lovely Caro up and begin to enjoy writing the book again. 😉

The ending for this one has gotten mixed reviews. Some feel that it was realistic and gave me kudos for it. Others feel that I should have dealt more harshly with our favorite villainess. I will leave it for you to decide, should you read the book.

For now, I am offering you the first chapter, and a chance to win a copy of the book, if you have not already purchased it. Giveaway details are below the excerpt. 

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“Miss Caroline Bingley, sir.” Bowing, the man stepped out of the way as Bingley’s sister swept in.

Stopping in the center of the room, she spoke. “Charles, what have you done? You have not purchased this hovel, have you, and wasted our father’s money?”

Chapter 1

Elizabeth Darcy’s wide eyes sought out her husband’s as they rose to greet the newest visitor to Netherfield Park. The Darcys were newly-married, and had spent the previous few weeks visiting the estate, which was being leased by Fitzwilliam Darcy’s friend, Charles Bingley. Bingley’s sister, Caroline, had just sauntered in, unexpectedly and with derogatory comments to her brother about the house.

Darcy returned his wife’s look with a roll of his eyes. While Elizabeth had never met Bingley’s sister, Darcy had been avoiding her since almost the moment they became acquainted. Her current unpleasantly dramatic entrance, typical behavior on her part, was the reason. That, and the fact that she quite obviously set her cap at him the first time she met him. He wondered why she was here now, given what he knew about her current circumstances. Darcy reached for Elizabeth’s hand, laying it on his arm and squeezing it. If it were not the height of rudeness, he would seat them both; they ought to be comfortable while they enjoyed what was certain to be a spectacular performance from Caroline Bingley.

“Caroline, what are you doing here? Why are you not in Yorkshire?”

“Can a sister not visit her brother? I read your letter describing Netherfield and knew I must see the place for myself.”

“With no warning? How do you know I have a room for you?” Bingley shook his head. “Seriously, Caroline, if this were your home and someone did that, you would be angry. In any event, we will have to discuss it later. Come, greet the Darcys.” He gestured to the group of chairs and couches clustered in the center of the room.

Caroline’s sharp eyes had not missed that her brother’s guests were his friend and his friend’s sister. The other two were unknown to her, but based on her mode of dress, one was probably Georgiana Darcy’s companion. The other, Caroline could not begin to speculate on, but she could not like the way the ugly little thing stood so close to Darcy. Surely that is not his new wife? Why, there is not a fine feature in her face! I will put a stop to that immediately.

“I see them standing there! Mr. Darcy,” Caroline cooed, approaching him with a gleam in her eye as her hands reached out to clasp his unoccupied arm. “It is so good to see you again.”

Disengaging his arm from Caroline’s clutches, Darcy returned her greeting. He turned toward Elizabeth, intending to introduce her to Bingley’s sister, when Caroline interrupted.

“And Miss Darcy! My, how you have grown since last I saw you! I am delighted you are here! We shall have a merry time together!”

Georgiana Darcy blushed at Caroline’s rudeness, and her fawning. She was not confident enough to say what she liked…that she doubted they would have a good time and she was eager to see Caroline’s face when Elizabeth was introduced…so she simply smiled and nodded. With luck, she will turn her embarrassing attention elsewhere. When it became obvious that Caroline was going to continue speaking instead of asking for introductions to the ladies in the room that she did not know, Georgiana gathered her courage and, blushing, blurted out, “May I introduce you to Mrs. Annesley? She is my companion; she came to me a few months ago.”

Not one to miss the opportunity to ingratiate herself with someone of higher standing, even if it meant acknowledging that person’s servant, Caroline fixed a smile on her face and greeted her newest acquaintance before turning her attention back to Darcy.

“Mr. Darcy,” she began as she settled herself into the nearest sofa. “Come, sit here; tell me how you have been.”

Darcy’s mien, always serious, took on a harsher cast as his anger grew at Caroline’s slight of his wife. He opened his mouth to speak but shut it again when his friend spoke to Caroline.

“I am amazed at your rudeness, Sister. You sit as though there is no one else in the room to whom you need an introduction.” Bingley stepped from his position in the center of the room to stand on the other side of Elizabeth from Darcy. His position was as symbolic as it was practical. He had been out from under his sister’s thumb for months and had found the time apart rather freeing. He had come to realize how often and thoroughly she had run his affairs while they lived in the same house; he did not wish to return to such a situation. He needed her to see that he was his own man, one who knew right from wrong and would act according to his own wishes. “Darcy attempted, when you spoke to him before, to introduce you to Mrs. Darcy. You will stand and allow him to do so.”

Her sour look indicated to all Miss Bingley’s feelings about her brother’s edict, yet rise she did. Silently, she allowed the object of her former—and, if one were honest—current desires to introduce his wife. His wife! Caroline seethed inside, even as she curtseyed and greeted Mrs. Darcy with a weak smile and lukewarm words.

Caroline Bingley was Charles’ youngest sister and the baby of the family. Indulged by her parents, she was unused to being denied what she wanted, and what she wanted, from the first time she laid eyes on him, was Fitzwilliam Darcy. The wealthy and handsome Darcy was everything Caroline ever desired in a husband and was her way to raise her family above their tradesman roots.

Caroline’s father had worked hard to make certain his children had the funds set aside that would allow them to rise above their status and into the world of the landed gentry. It was her mother, however, who impressed upon a young Caroline the importance of moving up in society. Mr. and Mrs. Bingley had passed several years ago, but Caroline could still hear her mother’s voice in her ear, drilling into her the expectations of her parents. Caroline had taken those admonitions to heart and, after Mrs. Bingley passed, vowed to marry as high as possible.

It was not that Caroline had ever loved Darcy. She did not believe in love. Love was for unambitious fools who were satisfied with remaining where they were instead of advancing. She was not a fool. What Caroline had loved was Darcy’s status, and his income. She had found him rather dull as a person; he was always serious and stern and hated the social whirl that she thrived on. She had not been worried about these differences, since she could have worked on him after they were married and changed his feelings about society, thus ensuring she would not have been denied the thing she loved the most.

Caroline had been within reach of her goal, she thought, until this past spring, when she was involved in a public altercation with the daughter of a viscount at one of the premier social events of the season. Now, she was back in the south of England, after spending months in Yorkshire with her sister, brother-in-law, and aunt. She had arrived at her brother’s estate a few minutes ago. She was not impressed. Her brother’s voice as he gestured for her to sit was full of irritation.

“What do you mean by calling Netherfield a hovel? This is a beautiful estate!”

“It sits out in the middle of nowhere, Charles. There is nothing here. Have you seen that crossroads they call a town nearby? I daresay there is nothing fashionable to be found, much less purchased.”

“Well, Sister, it is a ‘country estate.’ Surely you did not expect a large population.” Bingley did his best to rein in his anger at Caroline’s presumption. “Why are you not in Yorkshire with our aunt? And, what about your suitor?”

“My suitor,” Caroline sniffed. “I do not know what Mr. Meade is doing. I could do far better than the likes of him.” Her eyes strayed to Darcy, then to the woman sitting beside him, narrowing to slits as she surveyed the well-dressed nobody. Choking back a sudden flood of tears and knowing she needed time alone to think about things, she suddenly stood. “I should like to refresh myself. I shall see you at dinner. You do serve dinner at the usual hour?”

“I do, but Caroline, I do not want to hear that you have berated my staff if your rooms are not ready for your use. You came here uninvited and unannounced, and made more work for an already very busy household. It is not your place to disrupt things. I should tell you that I have asked Mrs. Darcy to be my hostess and to run my house while she is here. If you remain at Netherfield after the Darcys leave, you are free to take over, but until then, it is my wish for her to continue as she has.”

Caroline kept her face as blank as possible at this news, but inside, she was seething. It was an insult for her brother to choose to allow that woman to remain in control of his house when he had a female relative to take over. Not wishing to cause a scene by speaking her mind in front of everyone, Caroline contented herself with a small smile and a curtsey before walking away.

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Giveaway details: I am giving away two e-book copies of Caroline’s Censure. To enter the drawing, please comment below before 11:59 pm on Thursday, October 19, 2017. Winners will be announced on Sunday, October 22, 2017.

 

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54 Responses to Fighting with Caroline Bingley, and a giveaway

  1. A series is a great accomplishment! Congratulations! Anxious to hate this Caroline as much as I love Bingley.

    • Well, maybe, but Elizabeth had been doing it for a couple weeks already and Caro showed up unexpectedly and unannounced, and Bingley is determined to stand up for himself. Can’t blame the man for growing a backbone, right? Best wishes in the drawing. 🙂

  2. Congratulations on the successful publication of the book, Zoe. I definitely hate this Caroline more than canon and I hope she gets a taste of her own medicine. But I like this Bingley a lot better as he is able to reign over his sister’s rude behaviour. Thank you for the giveaway.

    • You’re welcome, and thank you! I have always felt that Bingley had more to him than fan fiction authors gave him credit for, and I like to write him that way. Insecure he was, spineless he was not. Best wishes in the drawing! 🙂

  3. I like the explanation of how Caroline might have become the obnoxious person she is. I can’t wait until Elizabeth puts her in her place!!

  4. oooooooo….fasten your seatbelts, it’s going to be a bumpy ride. Major trouble ahead. Sounds very angsty, but fun. I’d love to win the giveaway, and if not then the very best of luck on the book’s success.

  5. Oh my! I wasn’t sure if I was reading about Caroline Bingley or Lydia Bennet! Looking forward to getting the whole story — many thanks for offering a giveaway.

  6. Talk about spoiled and self-centered! It is always nice to see Caroline get her comeuppance – and with that attitude, she deserves it. Thank you for the chance to win a copy. And congratulations on the stories AND the series.

  7. Ugh. She is awful. Funny, all I can think of is a girl in my second grade class, who came fo school every day dressed as if to go to a party. She always strutted around with her nose in tne sir. One day she was called up to write on the blackboard, and did her strut. Her dress and slip were completely up in tne back, giving us a perfect view of her panties. We all cracked up.

    Caroline needs this kind of occurrence. Perhaps she can catch her gown in a dooe…

  8. Congrats on finishing a series. I never read a story where the main character was Caroline, look forward to giving it a try.

    • Thank you! I think Leenie has one that features Caroline. I’ll have to ask her. My story features Caroline, but Darcy and LIzzy are also main characters, and I show how they handled her interference. Best wishes in the drawing! 🙂

  9. I read the unedited version on darcyandlizzy.com and really enjoyed this story. I thought the ending was pretty good.

  10. Miss Bingley is an awful delight! I thoroughly enjoy your work and am looking forward to reading the series all together. (Yes, I am one of those!). Thank you for the work you do inspiring others and entertaining out unending love for those dear Darcys and their circle of friends and family.

  11. I have always wanted a book where we see more of Caroline and what she can do. Thank you for writing this. I can only begin to image what she will be up to. Thank you for the excerpt. The book certainly does not begin like canon but will be interested to learn how Elizabeth and Darcy meet and marry and does Jane enter the picture? Oh, what will Caroline do? Thank you for the giveaway.

    • Jane’s in there a bit through all three books in the series. She and Bingley get married, at any rate, in this one. 🙂 You’re welcome, and thank you! Best wishes in the drawing. 🙂

  12. I got a bit behind on reading so this was one that I had not purchased yet. It really does seem Caroline is worse. If Lady Catherine is not able to get in between D and E, Caroline does not stand a chance! Love to read how she gets hers in the end!! Thanks for the chance with a giveaway loved the others in the series!!

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