Darkness Falls Upon Pemberley: Part Eleven
Hello, AuAus! I’d originally written this particular chapter of my supernatural novella Darkness Falls Upon Pemberley as a scene between Darcy and Elizabeth, but as I was editing it this week I realized I would have preferred if I’d included a scene between Darcy and Mr. Bennet. So I wrote one and, as you probably guessed, this is it. There will be another chapter after this one. I’ll post it next Saturday, December 22nd; and yes, it’s between our hero and heroine. Phew! Finally!
Many, many thanks for your readership throughout this story. That and your comments are very much appreciated. Until next Saturday, happy reading, AuAus!
Best,
Susan
Just in case you wanted them:
Part Eleven
Darcy combed his fingers through his hair, exhaling heavily as he paced the length of Longbourn’s drawing room. Six months had passed since he’d last been in Hertfordshire; half a year since he’d seen Elizabeth. So much had happened in that span of time!
Too much, he thought as his mouth twisted ruefully.
The anticipation of finally seeing her again, coupled with the agitation he felt regarding the obvious differences in his appearance, was enough to drive him out of his mind. Darcy needed a distraction and strode to the nearest window, where he was afforded a picturesque view of the Bennets’ small park. The weather was fair—partly sunny and dry, if not a bit chilly for late spring—and he wondered whether Elizabeth would consent to walk out with him, preferably without a chaperone. He’d be foolish to think she wouldn’t have questions the moment she laid eyes on him, and figured it would be better if they had no audience under foot. Whether his answers to her questions would anger or delight her, however, remained to be seen.
His injuries had been severe, so severe in fact that Colonel Fitzwilliam immediately sent to London for a physician. After several weeks passed with no sign of improvement, Darcy’s sister was instructed to prepare herself for the inevitable. Richard was grieved, but Georgiana had been inconsolable. By the time Darcy’s heartbeat had grown so faint it could barely be detected, she’d borne all she possibly could. Richard hadn’t even tried to stop her.
Darcy’s hand went instinctively to his neck, where two small puncture wounds were once visible. They’d faded almost instantly after his change, but would have been concealed in any case; neatly hidden beneath his shirt collar and the artfully tied layers of his cravat. He’d lain unconscious for weeks and had barely even felt Georgiana’s bite, but the pain that followed was vivid. It consumed him utterly and raged in his body for an entire day before it gradually receded to nothing more than the minor discomfort of a sore throat.
His thirst was always with him, but, to his immense relief, it by no means ruled him or defined who he was. As it turned out, the well-practiced self-control Darcy had so prided himself upon throughout his eight-and-twenty-years as a human proved an asset to him still. Not only had the master of Pemberley learned to resist the mouth-watering lure of human blood, but he’d become adept at ignoring the incessant burn in his throat as well.
Sighing heavily, he laid his forehead against the window and closed his eyes. It was nearly tea time, and the room he occupied faced the east, untouched by the late afternoon sun. The smooth panes, however, weren’t cool to his touch, but almost warm. He still wasn’t quite accustomed to that; to his body’s temperature being either lower than or equal to that of inanimate objects. He recalled the first time he’d grasped Georgiana’s hand in his after he’d awoken from his transformation and smiled. By then, Darcy was so used to feeling the chill of death whenever he touched her that he hadn’t expected her skin to feel warm to him. It’d come as a shock, but it didn’t follow that shock was unwelcome. They were the same once again. The same temperature and the same type of entity; brother and sister still, yet bound by so much more than the blood of their birth. In a way, it was a relief.
A door slamming above-stairs roused him from his reverie, and the sound of approaching footsteps alerted him to the fact that he would soon have company. They were not the light staccato cadence of a lady’s, however, but the heavier footfalls of a gentleman. Darcy muttered an exhalation as he straightened to his full height. At the last moment, he chose to remain as he was, with his back to the room as he continued to admire the park. Seconds later the drawing room door was thrown open and the master of Pemberley sensed rather than saw Mr. Bennet enter.
“Mr. Darcy,” Mr. Bennet said without preamble. “I thought I made it perfectly clear to you the last time you were in Hertfordshire that your presence is neither desired, nor welcomed in my home.”
Darcy took a fortifying breath and turned to greet Elizabeth’s father. He was gratified to see the expression of anger on the elder man’s face transformed to one of shock. “How do you do, Mr. Bennet?” he replied pleasantly.
Mr. Bennet gaped at him before quickly shutting the door. “Are you mad, young man?” he hissed. “What in God’s name have you done!”
“Not a thing, I assure you.”
“Mr. Darcy, I am not accustomed to being trifled with. However insincere you chose to be, you will not find me so. I demand an answer.”
Darcy repressed the urge to roll his eyes, and said succinctly, “I was thrown from my horse.”
“You were thrown from your horse,” Mr. Bennet repeated lowly.
“Yes.”
“There is more to this story, I trust.”
Darcy shrugged his shoulders. “My prognosis was extremely grim. I was told that I nearly died.”
Mr. Bennet stared at him, long and hard. “Yet, here you are.”
The corners of Darcy’s mouth twitched, but his gaze was defiant. “Here I am.”
With pursed lips, Mr. Bennet indicated one of two chairs beside the hearth. Darcy obliged him with a curt inclination of his head.
“Exactly how well do you know my daughter, Mr. Darcy?” Elizabeth’s father asked, narrowing his eyes as he drummed his fingers upon the arm of his chair.
“Well enough to know she was thrown from her own horse several years ago,” he replied, giving the elder man a meaningful look.
Mr. Bennet said nothing, only prompted Darcy to continue with a wave of his hand.
Taking a moment to clear his throat, Darcy decided that complete honesty was most likely his best option. “My sister Georgiana is the one who saved me. If she hadn’t acted, I’m quite certain my cousin would have. So, you see,” he said wryly, “I had little choice in the matter. This was by no means a conscious decision on my part, as I’m certain were your thoughts upon seeing me today, but an act born of necessity, so to speak, executed by a young girl who could not bear to suffer the loss of a brother who she looked upon more as a father.”
“Your sister,” the elder man gasped incredulously. “You mean to tell me you have a sister and a cousin, both of whom are…”
“I do.”
Mr. Bennet shifted so he was sitting on the edge of his seat. “Is my Lizzy aware of them?”
“She knows about my sister, but even I didn’t know about Richard until I returned to Pemberley following my illness last November. At the time, my sister was still relatively…unreliable. She was left in the care of my cousin, who is a colonel in Her Majesty’s Army, and who also shares guardianship of her with me. All things considered, they’ve both adjusted well, Richard especially. His outlook is much like your daughter’s, as is his sense of humour and incomparable ability to tease.”
Mr. Bennet shook his head with a chuckle. “I can well imagine your frustration, then.”
Darcy bowed his head and leaned forward to rest his elbows upon his knees. “I assure you, sir, you cannot. I dare say no one can. The three people I cherished most in the world were vampires. Out of the three, only two wanted anything to do with me so long as I remained human.”
“You’ve come to court her, then,” the elder man muttered. “Even after the inhospitable way I treated you last autumn. I have to say, I’m impressed.”
A lengthy moment of silence passed between them. “With all due respect, Mr. Bennet, your treatment of me went far beyond simple rudeness. It was nothing short of insulting, and that is putting it mildly. Rather than bothering to get to know me, you chose to treat me with contempt, which not only injured me, but your daughter, who, out of the goodness of her heart, did nothing more than offer me her friendship.” He exhaled roughly and ran the back of his hand over his mouth. “To be perfectly honest, at this point I’ve little interest in courting Miss Elizabeth.”
Mr. Bennet removed his glasses and rubbed his eyes. “If you had a daughter, Mr. Darcy,” he said tightly, “perhaps, you’d better comprehend my reluctance to offer my trust so freely.”
Darcy’s temper flared and before he could check himself, said hotly, “My sister is more than ten years my junior. In my absence last summer, she was transformed from an innocent, carefree young girl into a veritable monster by the worst kind of fortune-hunter. In an instant, her hopes, nay, her entire future was dashed to hell, so believe me when I say I’m well aware of the potential threats posed by an attentive suitor!” He rose from his chair and strode to the opposite side of the room, his patience completely gone.
It was then that the drawing room door was thrown open. Darcy froze, his breath catching in his throat as Elizabeth entered amongst a flurry of pale silk. Her fiery gaze was fixed not on her father, but on him. Darcy swallowed thickly, her name on the tip of his tongue; but, to his consternation, her father’s voice preceded his.
“Elizabeth, exactly what do you think you’re doing?” Mr. Bennet demanded, rising from his chair.
“I’d like to speak with Mr. Darcy, Father. Alone, if you please.” She arched one slender brow in challenge.
Susan Adriani is the author of The Truth About Mr. Darcy
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Love it. Can’t wait to hear what Lizzie has to say. And we still don’t know what/who spooked his horse last time.
Definitely looking forward to your last chapter.
Thank you!
Not yet we don’t, Lisa.
Thank you for looking forward to the final chapter – hopefully I’ll be able to leave it alone without tweaking it to a longer post!
What about Lady Catherine? Won’t she have something to say about all this? I cannot believe she wouldn’t horn in around now, and I’d really like to know what she could say about the shades of Pemberley TO the shades of Pemberley. Much as we are eagerly awaiting the final scene between Darcy and Elizabeth, how can we deny Lady Catherine the opportunity to demand her share of the conversation since she must know of what they are speaking?
Beatrice, were you spying on me?! I so wanted to include Lady Catherine, but I just don’t have enough time to work her into this story and still give her the attention she deserves. I’ve always thought that Anne de Bourgh would make a wonderful vampire – so sickly and pale…
Sigh. Perhaps I’ll get to that one another day…
Ah the plot thickens. What to do? Naught but wait.
Thicken it does. Thank you, Elaine!
I’m loving this story
Dianna, I’m loving that you’re loving it. Thank you!
How comforting to know that Elizabeth and Georgiana will not be on the earth alone, but will have two wonderful heroes. Excepting Mr. Bennet, of course, seems to be a bit on the selfish side. Love this story Susan. More please.
Mr. Bennet is a bit selfish here, isn’t he? But then again, he was a bit selfish in JA’s original P&P as well…just in a different way.
I’m so happy you’re enjoying it, Rosanna – thank you!
Yay, an extra chapter!
Take that, Mr Bennet
Ok, that was childish but I did love Darcy’s snugness.
I can’t wait another week! What if the world really does end on the 21st and then I’ll never know what happens! That would be so sad, would it not? (This has been my favorite line of late, to try and persuade people to give me what I want. So far – surprise!- it hasn’t worked.)
I really want to read more about Darcy’s transformation period.
Monica, I thought you’d be happy to have an extra chapter.
Hopefully, the world won’t end on Friday. (I have it on good authority that my girl has been very good this year, and that Santa is bringing her something special on the 25th. I doubt she’d be pleased if those plans changed just because the world ended, lol!)
I’m thinking about publishing this story as an ebook later, and there are several things I’d like to expand upon, and will. Darcy’s post-transformation period is one of them. I didn’t want to get too deeply into certain aspects for several reasons (I wanted to keep it lighter, rather than darker – at the end of the day, this is a romance – and also, I didn’t want to hog the blog so to speak. As it is, it’s grown far more than I originally intended, but it’s been great fun.)
Another waiting period again. Can’t wait to know what is Lizzy’s reaction to his transformation.
Whoops! Sorry about that Evangeline! I’m afraid I’m a compulsive editor, and often get carried away adding and subtracting. I’m happy you’re looking forward to more!
Jippi! Another chapter! This is so great! I love it. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story!
Ingrid, I’m so happy you’re enjoying it – thank you! I love sharing it with you. It gives me something to look forward to…just like your comments!
Hmm, yes! I love that he gets to confront Mr. Bennet and from the position of a change that came to him involuntarily.
Can’t wait for the dialogue with Lizzy.
Sophia, I really wanted to include some sort of interaction between Darcy and Mr. Bennet. I think they both needed it. Thank you!
Oh no! Leaving us dangling!!!
You go, Darcy. Tell Mr. Bennet how it is! I like a tough-guy Darcy.
Well done, Susan. Anxious for the kissing part. LOL!
Lol! Sharon, you would be anxious for the kissing part…but so am I! I love writing scenes between Darcy and Elizabeth. He’s such a passionate man by nature, but they’re both vampires now – very passionate creatures in their own right. I wonder how that will play out…
(I’m keeping it fairly PG here so as not to offend anyone’s sensibilities. If I do an e-book, however…)
Oh, Susan, you must stop toying with us!!!!
Regina, I’m not doing it on purpose, I swear! I’ve been completely off the mark regarding my original estimate of the length of this story. (My husband will tell you he’d find that remarkably unsurprising – that I’m usually off the mark on a lot of things, lol!)
This story is really taking some shape.
It just keeps getting better and better! Now was it Wickham who spooked the horse? Can’t wait to see the sparks fly between Elizabeth and Darcy.