Austen’s Autumn
After an exceptional stretch of summery weather, lasting all through September and into October, fall has suddenly arrived in the Pacific Northwest. The days are shorter. Rain and wind have returned. The leaves are turning.
The other day, when I went out for my morning constitutional, I had multicolored maple leaves crunching underfoot and the occasional spider web hitting me in my face. I also took a plastic bag along with me, into which I hoped to collect enough blackberries to make a small cobbler – the last of the season.
Even though my outing was on foot, not horseback, it made me think of an excerpt from my second Austen-inspired novel, For Myself Alone:
John and I embark upon our ride shortly after noon, I on Viola and he on an ancient gelding called Max. The plan is to make for the glade in order to gather some of the blackberries that grow in the brambles round its fringes. Viola is eager, as am I, to set a brisk pace; Max and John are not so well able to follow suit. So the refreshing gallop I had hoped for must come in fits and starts. I race off for a stretch and then wait for John to catch me up. Still and all, the cool air and the beauty of the wood, both tinged with the first hints of autumn, do not disappoint.
Then I began wondering what Jane Austen had written about this season. As you know, she’s not prone to using long, flowery descriptions. And, off the top of my head, I couldn’t think of any specific references to “autumn” in her work. So I did a search. Most of the examples I found simply used the word as a point in time, such as, “since the beginning of our acquaintance with him last autumn…” But I did find a couple lovely passages that do poetic justice to the season.
This first one is from Mansfield Park, chapter 22:
[Fanny] went, however, and they sauntered about together many an half-hour in Mrs. Grant’s shrubbery, the weather being unusually mild for the time of year, and venturing sometimes even to sit down on one of the benches now comparatively unsheltered, remaining there perhaps till, in the midst of some tender ejaculation of Fanny’s on the sweets of so protracted an autumn, they were forced, by the sudden swell of a cold gust shaking down the last few yellow leaves about them to jump up and walk for warmth.
Jane doesn’t give us pages of extravagant description. Instead she paints a perfectly recognizable picture in just a few lines. My favorite passage, though, is from Persuasion, chapter 10. This scene takes place on the group walk to Winthrop:
Anne’s…pleasure in the walk must arise from the exercise and the day, from the view of the last smiles of the year upon the tawny leaves, and withered hedges, and from repeating to herself some few of the thousand poetical descriptions extant of autumn, that season of peculiar and inexhaustible influence on the mind of taste and tenderness, that season which had drawn from every poet, worthy of being read, some attempt at description, or some lines of feeling. She occupied her mind as much as possible in such like musings and quotations…
And a bit further on:
The sweet scenes of autumn were for a while put by, unless some tender sonnet, fraught with the apt analogy of the declining year, with declining happiness, and the images of youth and hope, and spring, all gone together, blessed her memory.
Ann has had to watch Captain Wentworth show his preference for the younger, blooming Louisa. She has heard him praise Louisa for her character of decision and firmness. Anne endures all this whilst knowing that the captain, whom she still loves, condemns her for being too easily persuaded, and that the beauty of her own spring has long since passed. It seems there is nothing but decline and decay ahead. Do you suppose Jane was feeling this way about her own life when she wrote this?
What a poignant picture – sweet and painfully sad, like the season itself. Imagine what a different feeling this scene would have taken on had the walk occurred on a cheerful spring day or in the heat of summer. No doubt Austen purposefully planned that it should take place in the fall instead, so that the season would set the mood for all Anne’s melancholy reflections.
How does fall effect you? Is the change in seasons a simple matter of fact to you, or does it take on some special significance? Austen refers to the way autumn is portrayed in poetry. Do you have a favorite verse on the subject?
By the way, the cobbler was delicious.
Shannon Winslow
Shannon Winslow was minding her own business - raising a family and working at a practical job - when Jane Austen changed her life. Suddenly smitten by all things Austen (and "Pride and Prejudice" in particular), she was inspired to write a sequel to her favorite book. With the success of her first novel, "The Darcys of Pemberley," she never looked back. Now pursuing writing full-time, Winslow has gone on to write two more Austenesque novels with more stories to come. She lives with her husband south of Seattle.
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Lovely ruminations on fall and Austen’s own bittersweet words, Shannon!
At least with Persuasion, she was writing it as she fell ill with the disease that finally killed her, so my sense is, she herself felt the autumn, the sorrow-sweetness in her own life…
But personally, fall is my favorite season! I feel not loss but the crisp excitement in the air!
Thanks for your comments, Vera. Enjoy the fall!
There’s a lot I like about autumn, but many people see it as a sad time of year. There is a poem showing the other side of the season; I do not agree with the sentiments but I have always loved this poem, and it is often on my mind. Here it is:
November
by Thomas Hood
No sun–no moon!
No morn–no noon!
No dawn–no dusk–no proper time of day–
No sky–no earthly view–
No distance looking blue–
No road–no street–
No “t’other side the way”–
No end to any Row–
No indications where the Crescents go–
No top to any steeple–
No recognitions of familiar people–
No courtesies for showing ‘em–
No knowing ‘em!
No mail–no post–
No news from any foreign coast–
No park–no ring–no afternoon gentility–
No company–no nobility–
No warmth, no cheerfulness, no healthful ease,
No comfortable feel in any member–
No shade, no shine, no butterflies, no bees,
No fruits, no flowers, no leaves, no birds,
November!
That’s an amazing poem, Beatrice! I’ve never heard it before, but I can see why it sticks in you mind. Thanks so much for sharing it.
Shannon, what a lovely post, and a delicious looking cobbler! All the blackberries are long gone in my neck of the woods, but I’ll enjoy them vicariously through you.
Autumn is absolutely my favorite season. I love it for its bright colors and the way the sky looks so blue; for the crispness in the air, the smell of wood smoke, and the crunching of leaves beneath my feet. Here are a few lines from my upcoming novel that were inspired by my love of the season:
With her skirts billowing in the wind as she wandered through the countryside, Elizabeth breathed the fresh air and distinctive scents of late autumn: composting leaves, wood smoke, apples, hay.
There was not a cloud in the sky, which was a brilliant, almost impossible shade of blue; a striking contrast to the rich, golden hues and pale browns of the landscape.
A lovely ode to autumn! You are quite a poet yourself, Susan.
Lovely post, Shannon and gorgeously evocative photos! Even though my children are all grown up I still get that ‘Back to School’ feeling in the autumn, which I associate with a pencil case full of new colours, playing ‘conkers’ and gathering sweet chestnuts. I’ve alway loved a new exercise book for writing stories and still get that same excitement when I start something new. For me, autumn is new ideas, and new manuscripts with the thoughts of a new book!
Glad you enjoyed it, Jane! Your remarks remind me of You’ve Got Mail – “bouquets of freshly sharpened pencils” – but I have no idea what ‘conkers’ is. Sounds intriguing.
It’s good fun finding conkers but not so much fun playing conkers in my opinion, as you always end up getting hit on the knuckles! Conkers are lovely big seeds from the horse chestnut tree I think, and you put a hole through the conker and thread a shoelace through. You dangle it and your opponent hits your conker with theirs, the person whose conker doesn’t break is the winner. It’s banned in most schools here due to safety concerns – I should imagine most school kids would still play it surreptitiously though!
Thanks for the explanation, Ceri. I guess I have heard of this before – kind of odd, though.
Loved the excerpt, Shannon!
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For me — like Vera and Susan A. — fall is my favorite season
I love the changing of the leaves and the crisp temperatures. Plus, I’m a big fan of the autumn holidays, especially Thanksgiving.
Wow! I see fall has a lot of fans coming to it’s defense! I suppose it depends where you live. We don’t have the most spectacular fall colors here in the Seattle area – too much rain and too many evergreen trees for that. The native bigleaf maples turn yellow, but pretty much everything else just goes moldy brown. The best fall color we get is from non-natives planted in people’s yards.
I love the autumn altho in the Uk we tend to get loads of rain when it’s not raining you can get some lovely bright autumn days with all the leaves turning. Makes you want to get your wellies on and go for a walk to kick the leaves
Sounds like here, Ceri
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I do love all the sights and smells of Fall, and the crisp air. I’d never thought much about the symbolism of scenes taking place during certain seasons.
I do get a bit anxious this time of year knowing my birthday and the holidays are coming up. I work retail and the craziness of it takes away a lot of the enjoyment of Thanksgiving and Christmas. Maybe I’ll celebrate this year with a new job lol.
One can hope.
Yeah, ditch the day job!
I think you’re right, though, Monica. I don’t dislike fall itself; it’s what I associate with it – primarily that the long, dreary winter is ahead, in my case.
Conkers are horse chestnuts used in a game where you suspend a chestnut (not the tree – just the nut) on a string and hit it against someone else’s chestnut. The aim is to knock the opponent’s conker off its string or break it. I played this as a child in England, but now I can no longer see the charm of the game. More at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Conkers
That’s right. I remeber seeing it on some show I was watching a while back (I remember now. It was on Larkrise to Candleford). Thanks for the explanation.
I love fall! Where I live, it doesn’t really show up until November usually. So I associate fall with my birthday and Thanksgiving and caramel and boots and sweaters and hot coffee and snuggling up with a book and gorgeous colors of orange, gold and bronze. I love the cold crisp snap in the air, the smell of wood burning, even the gray overcast is okay with me because it brings on the cold that makes it autumn. LOL Yep, I’m a fan.
I think that’s Jane’s personal decline almost HAD to show up in her writing. It’s what was in her soul.
You’ve convinced me, Stephanie. Fall is fabulous! And happy birthday to you a little early.
I neither hate nor love autumn season because there is no four seasons where I live. Everyday is always hot or humid so I envy those who get to experience winter, spring and autumn.
Enjoy the good weather while you can!
Thanks for putting this in perspective. Yes, the change of seasons is a treat in itself.
Fall is my favorite time of year, usually, because it’s the start of a school year and that’s always a beginning for me.
I spent some time in the Pacific Northwest, that picture of the berries make me miss it!
Thanks for the comment, Nina. Most of the year I hate the blackberry plants (they try to take over my yard everytime I turn my back, and rip my skin with their vicious thorns), but the berries justify their existance… more or less.
This is lovely. A nice break from Halloween. I love the fall but it is too brief. The holiday season and its stress comes way too quickly.
I’m with you, Kim. I hate being rushed by retailers into what has now become one, giant, 3-month-long mega-holiday. “Happy Hallothanksmas!”
Others may think of spring as the perfect season, but I always preferred autumn.